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dehacked: fix grammatical errors

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Update the dehacked lump info to fix various punctuation,
capitalization, and grammar errors, as well as made the text flow a
little better throughout the game, making it seem more professional.
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Colton G. Rushton 2019-06-27 15:16:50 -03:00 • committed by Mike Swanson
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@ -369,12 +369,12 @@ E1TEXT = You've made it out of the outpost.\n\
There could be a way to escape in there.
E2TEXT = The massive brutes collapse onto\n\
the ground. They fall apart bit by bit.\n\
Unfortunately, there was a no ship\n\
Unfortunately, there was no ship\n\
here either. The Labs have bizarre\n\
technology though. Like this one.\n\n\
A huge teleporter machine, set for...\n\
A place called Horizon?\n\n\
You never heard of such thing before.\n\
You never heard of such a thing before.\n\
Maybe it's another AGM facility.\n\
Meaning there could be a ship on\n\
the other side. Sounds like a good\n\
@ -395,11 +395,11 @@ E3TEXT = The abomination explodes into\n\
You drop all your weapons on\n\
the ground and step on the platform,\n\
reintegrating on Double Impact.
E4TEXT = Despite fighting an army of monsters\n\
E4TEXT = Despite fighting an army of monsters,\n\
you managed to find a ship here.\n\
Looks like freedom is yours.\n\n\
"Time to get out of here."\n\
You tell yourself and plump down\n\
you tell yourself and plump down\n\
on the comfortable chair.\n\n\
The ship rumbles as she wakes up.\n\
As you lift off, you think of Earth.\n\n\
@ -429,13 +429,13 @@ C2TEXT = The facility is gone, no doubt there.\n\
a city unknown to you. City means\n\
people, right?\n\n\
The bolts holding the platform\n\
flies off over the ledge. The place\n\
fly off over the ledge. The place\n\
is falling apart. You quickly step on\n\
the platform and reappear at the city\n\
the platform and reappear at the city.\n\
It's been destroyed to the ground.\n\n\
You can't go back either.
# After MAP20, before MAP21:
C3TEXT = There is no AGM here. no humans.\n\
C3TEXT = There is no AGM here. No humans.\n\
Just monsters and monsters.\n\
And you.\n\
This could be the beginning of\n\
@ -451,13 +451,13 @@ C3TEXT = There is no AGM here. no humans.\n\
You're stuck here once again.
# After MAP30 (endgame text):
C4TEXT = The evil thing becomes unstable.\n\n\
Its final roars echoes throughout the\n\
room till it crumples into scrap metal.\n\
Its final roars echo throughout the\n\
room until it crumples into scrap metal.\n\
A portal opens up, and in it, you see a\n\
small town. You jump in quickly.\n\
AGM learned its lesson this time.\n\n\
Hopefully.\n\n\
No one will know know who saved them.\n\n\
No one will know who saved them.\n\n\
No one will know what happened here.\n\n\
No one will ever find you again.
# Before MAP31 (secret level #1):
@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ C5TEXT = You step onto the machine and\n\
after a strange flash you find\n\
yourself in a rusty cage.\n\n\
"What is this place?"\n\n\
Before you can wonder further\n\
Before you can wonder further,\n\
you see monsters all around\n\
you. It's a trap.\n\n\
You silently bring out\n\