From 629c6e0289474fc9d8bd2674c3f51434321620fc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: mc776 <24984517+mc776@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 21 Mar 2023 23:21:47 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] dehacked: tweak E2 endtext.

The previous was a poorly remembered "what's a bit of X between friends" meme. It doesn't work here.
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 lumps/dehacked/dehacked.txt | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/lumps/dehacked/dehacked.txt b/lumps/dehacked/dehacked.txt
index 1885b45a..db90f7de 100644
--- a/lumps/dehacked/dehacked.txt
+++ b/lumps/dehacked/dehacked.txt
@@ -433,11 +433,11 @@ E2TEXT = The massive brutes collapse onto the\n\
          But no ship: the launch bay sits empty,\n\
          leaving only a massive teleporter pad.\n\
          Limited inorganics. Fixed destination.\n\n\
-         Judging from that name, it's probably\n\
-         AGM's ship hub in this star cluster.\n\
+         The name suggests it's probably the new\n\
+         AGM ship hub in this remote star cluster.\n\
          Bastards owe you for what they've done,\n\
-         so what's a little interstellar hijacking\n\
-         but some D.I.Y. law enforcement?\n\n\
+         so what even is interstellar piracy\n\
+         but a bit of D.I.Y. law enforcement?\n\n\
          You board the platform and fade away.\n\
          Next stop: Horizon.
 E3TEXT = The abomination explodes into oblivion.\n\