dehacked: rewrite E2, E3.

E2 is my rewrite based on discussions with @shinobody, and E3 is @shinobody's with some edits by me.

More revisions hopefully to follow soon.
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@ -430,30 +430,30 @@ E1TEXT = Free at last from that dreadful outpost!\n\
E2TEXT = The massive brutes collapse onto the\n\
ground, falling apart bit by bit.\n\
The starport is yours.\n\n\
But where is the ship? In the launch bay\n\
you find only one enormous teleporter.\n\
But no ship: the launch bay sits empty,\n\
leaving only a massive teleporter pad.\n\
Limited inorganics. Fixed destination.\n\n\
You've never heard of this "Horizon."\n\n\
Probably another AGM outpost, which means\n\
you should be able to find a ship on the\n\
other side. Which means you've got a plan -\n\
not a good plan, but as good as it gets.\n\n\
Judging from that name, it's probably\n\
AGM's ship hub in this star cluster.\n\
Bastards owe you for what they've done,\n\
so what's a little interstellar hijacking\n\
but some D.I.Y. law enforcement?\n\n\
You board the platform and fade away.\n\
Next stop: Horizon.
E3TEXT = The abomination explodes into oblivion.\n\
You, however, remain grounded on Horizon -\n\
a world even worse than the one that had\n\
you rotting away in a cage for years.\n\n\
Which means you're still trapped.\n\n\
Deep beneath the monster's lair is another\n\
interplanetary teleporter, this time set\n\
for a place unhelpfully described only as\n\
"Double Impact." There's nothing in any AGM\n\
archives you've found under this name, but\n\
teleporters can only go so far - you've got\n\
to find a functioning ship somewhere!\n\n\
You drop your gear and get on the pad,\n\
reintegrating on yet another new world...
What the hell even was that?\n\n\
As the shadow sets over this red rock,\n\
you realize that you're now trapped here.\n\
At least you've got more space in this\n\
wasteland than your old cell.\n\n\
You kick the corpse in anger, and it feels\n\
good. You kick it again, and a remote falls\n\
out. You press the button, and hear a click\n\
revealing a teleport pad nearby. You look\n\
at the gizmo - it says "To Double Impact."\n\n\
Wherever or whatever that is, you pray\n\
to any listening deity that there's\n\
a working ship on the other side.
E4TEXT = After yet another army of monsters\n\
you manage to find a functioning ship.\n\
Looks like freedom is yours.\n\n\