dehacked: rewrite E2, E3.

E2 is my rewrite based on discussions with @shinobody, and E3 is @shinobody's with some edits by me.

More revisions hopefully to follow soon.
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@ -430,30 +430,30 @@ E1TEXT = Free at last from that dreadful outpost!\n\
E2TEXT = The massive brutes collapse onto the\n\ E2TEXT = The massive brutes collapse onto the\n\
ground, falling apart bit by bit.\n\ ground, falling apart bit by bit.\n\
The starport is yours.\n\n\ The starport is yours.\n\n\
But where is the ship? In the launch bay\n\ But no ship: the launch bay sits empty,\n\
you find only one enormous teleporter.\n\ leaving only a massive teleporter pad.\n\
Limited inorganics. Fixed destination.\n\n\ Limited inorganics. Fixed destination.\n\n\
You've never heard of this "Horizon."\n\n\ Judging from that name, it's probably\n\
Probably another AGM outpost, which means\n\ AGM's ship hub in this star cluster.\n\
you should be able to find a ship on the\n\ Bastards owe you for what they've done,\n\
other side. Which means you've got a plan -\n\ so what's a little interstellar hijacking\n\
not a good plan, but as good as it gets.\n\n\ but some D.I.Y. law enforcement?\n\n\
You board the platform and fade away.\n\ You board the platform and fade away.\n\
Next stop: Horizon. Next stop: Horizon.
E3TEXT = The abomination explodes into oblivion.\n\ E3TEXT = The abomination explodes into oblivion.\n\
You, however, remain grounded on Horizon -\n\ What the hell even was that?\n\n\
a world even worse than the one that had\n\ As the shadow sets over this red rock,\n\
you rotting away in a cage for years.\n\n\ you realize that you're now trapped here.\n\
Which means you're still trapped.\n\n\ At least you've got more space in this\n\
Deep beneath the monster's lair is another\n\ wasteland than your old cell.\n\n\
interplanetary teleporter, this time set\n\ You kick the corpse in anger, and it feels\n\
for a place unhelpfully described only as\n\ good. You kick it again, and a remote falls\n\
"Double Impact." There's nothing in any AGM\n\ out. You press the button, and hear a click\n\
archives you've found under this name, but\n\ revealing a teleport pad nearby. You look\n\
teleporters can only go so far - you've got\n\ at the gizmo - it says "To Double Impact."\n\n\
to find a functioning ship somewhere!\n\n\ Wherever or whatever that is, you pray\n\
You drop your gear and get on the pad,\n\ to any listening deity that there's\n\
reintegrating on yet another new world... a working ship on the other side.
E4TEXT = After yet another army of monsters\n\ E4TEXT = After yet another army of monsters\n\
you manage to find a functioning ship.\n\ you manage to find a functioning ship.\n\
Looks like freedom is yours.\n\n\ Looks like freedom is yours.\n\n\